Reviews For Memento Mori

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Reviewer: tiinaj1 (Signed)
04/21/15 - 09:09 pm
Chapter 1

I really liked this story a lot. It was very believable - the only think I felt backward about was the use & placement if the word "whom". Most of the time it made your writing very stiff and hard to read. Using " who" would make the story much easier to read. Thanks.

I favorited this story.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll take another look at it and see if i can shange the 'whom' problem.  I guess my love of proper grammer is showing lol!

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Reviewer: sian22 (Signed)
04/20/15 - 06:05 pm
Chapter 1

This was lovely...thank you for it



Author's Response:

glad you liked it but it wasn't as good as yours! You should have goten first place ;) 

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