Reviewer: tiinaj1 (Signed)
04/21/15 - 09:09 pm
I really liked this story a lot. It was very believable - the only think I felt backward about was the use & placement if the word "whom". Most of the time it made your writing very stiff and hard to read. Using " who" would make the story much easier to read. Thanks.
I favorited this story.
Thank you! I'll take another look at it and see if i can shange the 'whom' problem. I guess my love of proper grammer is showing lol!
Reviewer: sian22 (Signed)
04/20/15 - 06:05 pm
This was lovely...thank you for it
glad you liked it but it wasn't as good as yours! You should have goten first place ;)