Reviews For The Invasion

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Reviewer: klose (Signed)
06/07/15 - 05:30 am
Chapter 5

I have always been fond of the Northern Rangers and their unsung work keeping the Shire safe, so it's great to see one of them interacting with the Hobbits here--well, in between being unconscious anyway, lol. The Hobbits here are all wonderful, too; I never felt confused by all the different characters, and rather was very much pulled in by your portrayal of everyday Hobbit culture. I can't wait to see how the story continues! 

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Reviewer: tiinaj1 (Signed)
06/03/15 - 10:39 pm
Chapter 5

This is an outstanding story - I'm looking forward to the rest of the story! Thank you for taking the time to spell check & take care of grammer. Its appreciated!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

I'm of the generation that had correct spelling and grammer drilled into us. It just makes sense to me to make my work as readable as possible.

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